The idea was good...
...but it still needs some work. By utilizing a simple 'play' button in the beginning you could avoid the horrible echo effect of the music when it starts replaying. Also, you could have left the title screens up longer. I could read them fine, but some people can't read that fast.
The animation was good, though. If you just adjust those two problems you could have a cute little animation. :)
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